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Poetic License

Today in Sandi Crozier’s language arts class, 5th grader, Tai R., offers me this poetic riddle:

I’m with you 24/7 and 365

I can see you but you can’t see me

I rely on you and you rely on me

But you’re always hurting me

What am I?

Tai R. shows off his riddle poem

I scratch my head, trying to come up with the answer, but I’m equally curious about the checkerboard-patterned paper on which Tai’s displayed his poem. It turns out that it’s actually two pieces of paper, precisely cut and woven together in a way so that only when Tai pulls the edges apart, he reveals the answer to the riddle. Sorry… you’ll have to wait.

Today is construction day— a “poetry factory”— in Sandi’s class, an essential part of the 5th grade Poetry Museum project, a rite of passage for Wildwood elementary students.  Sandi explains the project to me. “For our poetry unit, the students learn about 18 different styles and give each one a try. They select their favorite 5 pieces and transfer them to a choice of paper templates; some are 3-D, others are folded paper creations like Tai’s.”

Associate teacher Linda Gordon explains to me how the poetry factory works. “The students fill out an actual work order, describing the kind of template they’d like, along with the colors they’d like it in,” she says. “I take the orders from the students and go to the faculty work room where I use a paper die-cutting machine to make the templates to the specifications. Then Sandi and I help the kids assemble their templates.”

Brennon B. readies one of his poem templates

Touring the classroom, I see students working with beautiful paper boxes, geometric shapes, and even paper roller coasters. Students are also experimenting with free verse, odes, and two voice poems. Tai’s classmate, Brennon B., shows me the template on which he’ll record his art/architecture poem about the Staples Center. He also shows me the “squash” template on which he’ll record another poem, a very cool paper creation that opens up accordion-style.

When I ask where the inspiration for the various templates comes from, associate teacher Linda Gordon motions toward Sandi and says, jokingly, “You know Sandi. She never sleeps!” Sandi laughs and tells me that she has collected and created the various 3-D templates over the years. “Some of them I’ve been making since I was a child,” she says, “and others, like the ‘squash,’ I found online, and couldn’t pass up.”

Brennon B. shows off the “squash” template

Fifth grader, Maxwell H. invites me over to his table to show off the template he’s working on— a city skyline. “I wrote one of my poems about New York City,” he says, “and this one was just perfect.”

To round out their Poetry Museum projects, students like Maxwell write an “About the Poet” biography and are encouraged to create one extra credit piece of their own design.  “We’ve had students’ poems on ice skates, suspended in water, and written on eggshells,” Sandi says.

Fifth graders (left to right) Harry Z., Ella K., and Maxwell H. work on their poems

Come see what this year’s 5th grade poets have created at the Wildwood Poetry Museum, Thursday, May 31, from 8:30-9:30 am.  As for Tai’s riddle poem, you won’t have to wait until May 31. He shows me how to open up his woven template to reveal the answer: Air!

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Envisioning Their Future

“The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams.” ~ Eleanor Roosevelt

Over the past  month, Wildwood 9th graders have been creating a Class of 2015 time capsule. The advisory project presents each student with a unique opportunity to envision their dreams for the future.

Students are tasked with crafting a message to their future selves, as individuals and as a class. The goal is to creatively capture their hopes and dreams, and the emphasis is entirely on the creative. Students can express their wishes in any visual art form, via music, through creative writing, performing arts, or videography.

While their 10th grade peers are busy preparing for Gateway presentations later this month, the 9th graders are engaged in answering essential questions as they construct their time capsule messages, including: Who am I now/Who will I be at the end of 12th grade? and How will the Class of 2015 leave its mark on Wildwood?

Ninth graders (left to right), Sonali B., Maya H., Sarah S-M., and Gleeza F., write their poems

Maya H. is one of several 9th grade girls who chose poetry. “I’m writing a poem called ‘Searching,’” she says. “It’s about how these three high school years really are the time to start to figure out who you are, and who you really want to be.”  Her friend, Sarah S-M., described how her poem’s structure relates to the project. “Each stanza begins with the same three lines related to a theme,” she tells me, “’I was…’ describes who I was in elementary school, ‘I am…’ is about me now, and ‘I will be…’ is about my future—when I graduate.”

Ninth grader, Charlotte V., shows off the visual side of her postcard

In the visual arts room, several other students are engaged in the intricate work of  constructing multi-layered mixed media projects out of construction paper, cut-out photos and images, markers and text. “This is a postcard to my future self,” says 9th grader Charlotte V. “On one side I put out pictures of people and styles that are popular today and on the other, I’m writing a message to myself as a 12th grader about what I hope to be like by then.”

The performing arts group takes a break from their time capsule work

Ninth graders who chose to create a performance piece are now busy choosing dialogue by selecting phrases and words from letters they wrote to their future selves last week. The students read aloud, choosing the words that appeal the most to them. “Fly into life like a bird, my friend,” one student reads. “Relax, everything will be ok,” says another.  Once students have chosen their favorite phrases, teacher Melissa Bales explains, “you’ll get a chance to act these out as a group, and we’ll tape it for you to see when you’re seniors.”

I found the project inspiring, and instructive. I saw students engaged in process, and maybe not entirely aware of the deep work they were accomplishing as they use music, paper, paint and words in constructing blueprints for their future selves. That depth will be revealed, no doubt, when the Class of 2015 opens its class time capsule three years in the future and these students catch a glimpse of their past selves.

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The power of words

At Wildwood, words and relationships matter, and that’s clear even when you drop in on the K-1 Whale Pod and spend some time with our youngest students.

I arrived before class started and most students were already in the room, anticipating their day.  Some set up chairs at the four small, kid-sized tables.  Others check the day’s schedule to see when they’ll have science and time on the big yard.  Others were checking in with each other as a few parents lingered in the room, socializing and giving good-bye hugs.

Jeremy F. leads morning meeting in the Whale Pod

Everyday, the Whale Pod begins the school day with morning meeting.  Sitting on the floor rug, the eighteen students eagerly await the start. Jeremy F. is the meeting leader, which involves a lot of responsibility. First and foremost he gets to sit in the leader chair.  “Who has news?” Jeremy asks his classmate: eighteen hands go up.

“Morning meeting helps kids transition into the school day,” says Whale Pod head teacher, Sara Lev.  “It’s structured so that every student is recognized and, if he or she wants, allows every student’s voice to be heard.”

The news shared today includes; loose teeth, updates on grandparents who are on the mend, and casual invitations. One student, Max A., explains a new game that he’d like his classmates to try with him today on big yard.

Jeremy then chooses a green dinosaur-tipped pointer and leads the class through the morning message that Sara has written on the board; a message purposely embedded with grammar and punctuation mistakes for students to find and fix.  “Developing literacy skills is extremely important for emergent readers at this age,” Sara explains.

Jeremy F. reads the morning message

After Jeremy leads the class through attendance and the day’s schedule, Sara thanks him and finishes morning meeting with a fun round of freeze dance; the students have been sitting patiently for nearly twenty minutes after all.  Then, the Whale Pod is ready for Reading Workshop.

Today, Ryan Grant will lead the workshop.  Ryan, a student teacher from Antioch University, Los Angeles, has been with the Whale Pod since early January, being mentored by Sara Lev and the pod’s associate teacher, Alli Newell. Today, Ryan will lead the class in a lesson on poetry; specifically the power of poetic imagery.

Ryan reads a haiku aloud and asks the students to visualize the images that come to mind.  With all eyes shut, he shares a translation of a famous Japanese poet, Matsuo Bashō:

An old silent pond…

A frog jumps in the pond

Splash! All is silent again

Nita K.’s drawing

Smiles emerge the students’ faces and Ryan sets their work in motion, asking them to illustrate on paper, any images that the poem elicited for them.  Working at tables and on the floor, the students fill their papers with all manner of blue ponds, green frogs, and turbulent and peaceful waters.  When it’s time to come together in a circle and share, all students are eager to jump in and make a splash with their images.

Nita K., was very pleased with her picture’s simplicity as she shared with the class.  “It’s right when the frog jumps in,” she says, “right after it’s really loud and it’s about to get quiet again.”  Looking at Ryan, I can see the satisfaction on his face.  Nita had captured the power of poetic imagery- when words freeze a moment in time and the mind creates meaning, which can be conveyed and shared with others.

Connections start to grow here, and the Whale Pod day is structured to obliquely emphasize that what we say matters, and what we hear matters. At Wildwood, we believe understanding each other, and ideas, depends on close reading and strong relationships.

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